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A dry-eyed, deeply voiced Western about the years the United States took the Far West, told from the saddle of a man who was paid to be present and expected to keep quiet. Start here.

The horse came back. The man did not.

Near the second rise the mare stopped and put her ears forward and the mule stopped behind her. Enos felt the lead ropes tighten across his palm. He stood in the wagon cut with water over his boot soles and listened.

There were no birds. The cart had fallen behind somewhere past the willow cutting and he could not hear it yet.

Then a sound came from the brush ahead, low and short.

A horse blowing.

“What is it?” Tomás said, coming up.

“Hold this.”

Enos put the mule rope into the boy’s hand and did not wait to see whether it had been taken properly.

The grass at the road edge was knee high and wet through in three steps. Under the oaks the brush grew thick, willow and poison oak and young laurel gone dark with rain. Stems had been broken at about the height of a man’s belt. Mud had been dragged onto leaves and scraped away again.

The gray stood twenty feet in with one rein down and the saddle hanging under his belly. He had been there long enough to stop moving and not long enough to be quiet. His flanks were going. A raw streak showed along one side where the cinch had worked him.

Enos approached slowly and off the shoulder. The gray rolled an eye but stayed where he was. Some horses ran from everything when they were frightened and some stopped deciding altogether.

This one had stopped deciding.

Enos talked to him. It did not much matter what. He used Spanish, then English, then a low run of sound that was neither.

He caught the bridle and lifted the saddle enough to see beneath it.

The rig was better than the animal carrying it.

Not merely newer. Better. A sound tree under good leather, the skirts properly worked, a breast strap that had been cut from hide worth cutting, stirrup irons heavy enough to last. Whoever had put the rig together either knew horses or had enough money to hire somebody who did.

On the blanket there was a smear of dark down the near side, no wider than a hand, dried at the edges and tacky at the center.

Enos unbuckled the cinch and took the saddle off.

The gray shuddered once when the weight came away. Enos laid the saddle beneath an oak where the rain had not reached the ground and ran a hand along the horse’s back. Nothing broken.

The bridle was good too. Plain, dark leather, no ornament, but the bit had been selected rather than merely purchased and the reins had enough weight in them to fall properly through a man’s hands.

Enos left it on the horse.

The tracks came out of the brush toward the road and stopped in a churn of mud where something had happened and it was no longer possible to say exactly what. Boot marks, one set and maybe two, and a place where a knee had gone down.

Tomás had come up behind him, which he had been told not to do.

“Whose horse?”

“His own, at the moment.”

“Was there a rider?”

Enos did not answer that.

“Go back and stand with the animals.”

“I can come.”

“Go back.”

The boy went.

The drag mark ran under the oaks along the line of least brush, thirty feet and then forty, through a stand of young laurel where the ground was needles and old leaf and held almost nothing. Enos followed a smear on one stem, then another lower down, and found where a boot had pushed through rotten leaves.

Then the mark stopped.

Whatever had been dragging had either got where it was going or quit.

Baker lay on his side beneath the laurel with his knees drawn up.

— from The Renegade Enos: Witness to the American West, a novel by H.L. Delaney, forthcoming from Basalt Sea Press.

Do not be clever with men hunting horses.

California, 1846. A man called Enos — one of the eleven names he will use in his lifetime — hires on with Frémont's third expedition as a packer and horse handler. He is useful, and useful is how a man gets kept. A woman who knows exactly what he is warns him early not to be clever with men hunting horses, and then tells him the part that matters: You are visible.

What follows is the conquest of the West seen from the man holding the horses: the murders at Klamath Lake and the lie spoken over the bodies; the forty-mile ride to a fishing village that had attacked no one; the killings on the beach at San Rafael, asked for out loud and granted out loud; the warrant naming five Joaquíns that described every Mexican rider in California and none of them; the head in a jar in a Stockton tent, a dollar a look. And running beneath all of it, in Washington parlors, the other war — the one fought with steel pens and fair copies, where a senator's daughter strikes the word shovel from a report so the reader will never see the graves.

For ten years Enos tells anyone who asks that he held horses. Then, on the southern Oregon coast, he watches a town stand on its porches while a woman is beaten the length of a street — and stops holding anything.

Drawing on the documented life of the man the government files called "the notorious Eneas or Enos" — veteran of Frémont's expedition, named instigator of the Rogue River outbreak, killer of Indian agent Ben Wright — The Renegade Enos is a novel about who writes the record, who is erased from it, and what it costs to author a single act the record cannot launder.

Lines from the book

A useful man overpaid is still useful.
A true sentence carried into the wrong place could do the work of a lie without becoming one.
The ledger just needs to balance.
"That phrase will not do." — "Why?" — "It lets the reader see the shovel."
The warrant had found all of them and none of them.
The safest name in California was the one that belonged to no one.
Nobody had ordered either. Nobody had made it necessary.
It was not done. It ran.
He said it plainly and not loudly, the way a man gives his name at a counter.
Je te vois.

For readers of Cormac McCarthy's Blood Meridian, Sebastian Barry's Days Without End, Hernan Diaz's Trust, and Percival Everett's James.